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古风楹联二十二期中级第二讲暗香组作业帖 | 
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1题对句回扣出句不紧。 
 
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同学好!对句一上联春刚来,下联桃花引蝶略快。对句二三平尾了。对句三桃源有出世之意,下联相思略有点跳。 
 
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对句一三不错,对句二芳华换酒可酌 
 
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好看的对句,学习了! 
 
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