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沧浪书院律二班第六讲丁香组作业: | 
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一题回答正确,二题格律正确,四句写景不错,但诗整体构架松散,主题不够突出。 
 
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一题回答正确。二题,摹景到位,主题表达清楚,注意一下承句少一字,起句的夕照斜阳略有重复。 
 
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1题,回答正确。二题,一二三句造景很好,小槕,槕字是笔误了吧,尾句结随意了,丰收乐坏,从主题上,还需斟酌。 
 
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1题回答正确,2题图,整体意境,三四句不如一二句描写的好。 
 
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