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对句很好,出句优秀。学习了。 
 
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问好倾心学友,探讨佳作,让我受益匪浅,二题做的很出色,只是第二题个人一感觉有上重下轻之意,如说得不觅,请谅解!!期待下..... 
 
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问好学友,清风试评:除了对句2出律外,其他都好。学习了 
 
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