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沧浪诗词学院楹联二期初级班踏雪组第五讲作业 | 

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问好学友,第一题完成很好,二题,欲,能愿动词,其余都好。三题,和月煮,和这里该是介词,同与的意思相同,其余都好,点赞 
 
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问好学友,一题正确,二题,正确,三题,相思该为名词,这里指对人牵挂的一种思念。和,介词,同与意思相同。其余都好,赞! 
 
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问好学友,一题,正确,二题,欲,能愿动词。三题,和月煮,和,介词。析联太简单了,重新析,对句,相思对寂寞不咋好,重新组织语句会更好。 
 
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问好影韵同学!作业优秀!二题个别词须斟酌,欲为动词,歌为动词。继续加油! 
 
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