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烟雨楼22期楹联班鹿鸣组第四讲作业帖 | 
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注意漂亮。对句好看。加油。 
 
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对句落,换吻,觅。 
 
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对句一三平。其他可以 
 
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对句二,出句已经落叶,对句不要落叶了。意一样。重字不可以。 
 
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作业不错。加油 
 
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填空可以,对句一三平。二,沁字考虑一下。沁人心脾,与出句色彩上不一。 
 
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填空不错。第一联虽然用拟人手法,差强人意。第二联卷字,透?可以再练 
 
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