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沧浪书院楹联四期清梅组高级班第一讲作业 | 
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问好学友:作业认真。继续努力。 
 
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问好学友,作业认真。继续努力。 
 
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问好老师,成联很好看,学习了! 
 
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问候学友:上比可以,下比更绝读起来别扭 
 
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问好学友,细分,和语词性不对,说,点联意上小合,改下会更好。 
 
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平仄有误,上下联偶数字应该平仄相间。 
 
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