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沧浪书院楹联四期金菊组中级班第五讲作业 | 
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问好学友,1题独坐/倦游可酌,2题云山与溪水意象过近 
 
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问好学友 2对句 流转词感觉不是很顺畅 。 
 
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问好同学:问题回答的很好。但是对句出律了。
我对一句;但凭诗酒慰余生 
 
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